Phillips story

Phillip was very mad, he said it`s his moms fault.It was his moms fault because it was her idea of going on a ship.Phillip wishes if he stayed with his dad, because he never wanted to leave curacao.He had many friends in curacao. The first day Phillip wanted to stay on the raft, but Timothy controlled him to get off the raft.The second day he was relaxing from his voyage.I think that Phlillip misses his mommy and regret staying with Timothy.Phillip was justing waiting for his dad to send planes.Timothy wants Phillip to start listening to timothy and wants him to get controled him.

Ala Tiomothy

Phillip and his mom had to travel because of world war two, his ship was very small not many passengers on the ship. The ship was very old. The people were screaming because they saw a submarine.It was very sad to leave their dad behind. The ship`s food was not that good.


If you locked  the doors you would be trapped. The ship was pretty old.The began to catch on fire the caption started to take people off and into the raft the ship sank, mostly everyone survived Phillip got seperated with his mom.

What I should excel in

The subject I want to excel in is chamush and reading. Last year I wasn`t good at chumash my test grades went very low.My highest test grade was 85, and during class I didn`t focus and I got distractive and bored, instead of listening and working i will draw. This year I want to focus and work hard.I also want to excel in reading because my reading level was high but not high enough. I
use to hate reading, but now want to read more and not skipping pages.